An new year means a new starts, we always want to forget or leave our bad luck and memory from last year. Someone said that if a man does not have a dream, then what he lives for? I can't help to support him. Family is significant to me, at the new year, I 'd like to bulid a prefect relationship with my family. Since I was two years old, my parents left me to my grandparents, then they went to Beijing to build up their enterprise. Athough my family become richer and richer, our relationship were not seemed closed. Then, when I was eight years old, I left my hometown to other city to study. Although I knew that city has a good primary school, I really did not want to leave with my relatives. I just knew listen to the counsel of my elders, so I studied in that city, lived in the school, and only could back to my home once a week. By the way, at that time, cell phone was not popular in china, so I could not contact my parents frequented. All these points make my parents and I had a cold relationship. If I could choose, I would not leave my hometown to study at a strange city. Maybe there are no “if” in the world, this word just loser’s dream that never come true. So, I reallly want to have a close relationship with my family. In 2011, my age is 21, I had already became an audlt, I don't want just leave this problem any more. My cousin will get married in this years, and all of my relationship will show up ant that time, I believe it's a good time for me to rebulid up the relationship with my family. In a word, my new year's resolution is I want to build a prefect relationship with my family.
Free Writing 1/10/2011 Time management Right now, in the world all off things are going faster and effective. People are trying to solve their problems with a little time, so, they begin to plan which can also called time management. I think it's a way to deal with our time and problems. I think if we could learn how to deal with our time and how to let our working become more effective, we should learn the time management. If we want to learn it, we should do from the little things, such like management our studying time and playing times. When we feel free, we always do not want study, we want relax ourselves and try to find the funny things. I think it made us lost a lot of improtant time
Travel
1/11/2011
Instruction
Everyone likes to travelling, it could help us relax our mind, expand our experience and learn other countries' culture. For example, China has 5000 years history, and Chinese elder left many traditional cultural to the country. If people have chance to travel China, their brain must be crushed from the colorful culture. When people decide to travel, they had a lot of things need to be fixed. The top three problems for most of traveler might be their travelling fee, visa and their safety.
01/23/2011
Ex. 2.13 Writing Assignment
Most Chinese care about their phone numbers or plate of their cars, it‘s a behavior of superstitions. From here, many people want to know why most Chinese are superstitious? In my opinions, first of all, to the superstitious most of Chinese rather believe it to be true than not. For example, most of Chinese do not like NO.4 inside their phone numbers or plates, because the pronunciation of 4 is simlar like "Death" in Chinese, which means it will bring unluck to them. Second, China has 5,000 years history, every of Chinese elders are superstitious, with time going, those behaviors of superstitions become our traditional culture. Such like, Chinese New Year, at that day, the elders must give their children"Hong Bao" which means wish their children's life will go safety and luckly. Finally, there are about 100 millions people in China are buddhistischand, and many temples locate in China. So, it makes many people trust religion.
01/24/2011
Ex. 2.14
Free writing
My major is finance, but I do not interested in it. In Beijing, my father has a company of his own, he wishes I can take off his business after I graduate from university, it makes me must choose finance as my major. My father told me that if i choose finance, it could help me make a lot of money and improve my state. For me, I just do not have that ability to deal with money and management a company. I like to have a close relationship with my friends, i do not want have a distant with them, because when i become a boss, i must keep away from them, and only have fake friends that just care about money and state. Since i had chosen it, I would like succeed in it, not for me, but aslo for my family. I think as an international student, if i study finance, at first i must improve my vocabulary, because there are many specific words in there. Second, we must pay our attention in the class, especially take the notes in the class. Most of Chinese are very shy, we believe that if we ask question to the teacher which means we did not listen carefully in the class, stop doing that, if we have questions, we must points out that, and put the tips in ur mind. Third, if we want succeed in finance we must do the exercise by ourselves, which could give a deep mind of the knowledge. Finally, we can try to deal with little business of our own, do not need spend a lot of money, just give a try and test yourself. That it, we just work hard and nerve give up, we will succeed in the future.
Paragraph
If we want succeed in Finance major, we must have
01/25/2011
p.104
Before i take a test, i had always feel norvise, because the test is like an unknown question, i am very confused, and often worry about if i miss some key points of knowledge or if i can do well. If i can choose the type of questions which test i should take, i would like to take multiple choice questions. The multiple choice question is very easy and it seems like give you many key terms to help you solve it and recall your mind, i just need to check if my result match the choices. On the other hands, if i can't solve it, at least, i only need to choose the answer that feel comfortable, it not like short answer or essay. By the way, the True/False question is a kind of very confused for me, because its seems like too similar, and if i do not pay much attention on it, it would be cause a lot of problems.
01/27/2011
Plagiarism
Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or close imitation of the language and thoughts of another author and the representation of them as one's own original work. I heard that there was guy spend a lot of time in OU's library try to find the paper that had plagiarismed. Finally, he found a lot papers, and even had many people had already gradated many years, but according to this researched, many people lost dregards. http://abclocal.go.com/wtvg/story?section=news/local&id=4045296 http://www.ohio.edu/linguistics/info/plagiarism.html
02/01/2011
Exercise 6.7
2. My country had some of the most beautiful sights you will ever see, in fact, as 5000 years history country, the beautiful sights are cover every where in China.
Builds
The Great Wall, TianAnMen square, Chairman Mao Square
Artwork
BinMaYong, Huangguo Mountain
My country had some of the most beautiful sights you will never see, such like the huge building The Great Wall, amazing artwork BinMa Yong and the natural sights Huangguo Mountain.
6.
many big companies require speaking english
the place you travel often speak english
American Movie speak english
english is a international language
English is the first International language, many big companies require there workers speak English. Many elders want their children speak one more language, of course should be English, and they slao want their children study abord where the pace speak English. students whose natiove language is not English may face many problems that English speakers do not encounter, such like the job requires, family's suggestion and for their education.
02/04/2011
Ex.6.12
Thesis Statement:
There may be several reasons, but three stand out.
1. One reason people save their books is to use them as reference material.
A. Reference
Example
B. Family
2. Another reason some people save books is to make a good impression.
A. library
1. look well read and therefore sophisticated
2. subtly reveal their interests.
3. people who enjoy reading have discovered the magic of books.
A. Each has transported the reader to another place.
B. repersents an experience
C. Example.
02/22/2011
EX. 9.4
Motivation something that causes a person to act in a certain way, do a certain thing, etc. Becasue it's the article's title, so I want give the deninition.
Esteem regard with respect or admiration One of the category of needs, I think it;s might be improtant
Actualization turn into action or fact One of the category of needs, and I don't know the word.
campaign to serve in I Just do not know the meaning
ailment a physical disorder or illness, especially of a minor Don't konw the meaning
hierarchy any system of persons or things ranked one above another.
It's printing as BOLD type, so I think it's improtant.
fulfill to perform or do, as duty; obey or follow, as commands. This word is appear several times, I think it's improtant.
1. hunger, thirst.survival security, protection. security and freedom sense of belonging ,love. relationship with people self-esteem, recognition, status. respect from people self development, self realization. complete the goal of life 2. advertisers would make more attractive ads for their costumers by understand consumer needs. 3. physiological: restaurant offer food safety needs: car and house will make you feel safe social needs: facebook supply a place for peopkle to make friends esteem needs: be interview by TV make a person has more popularity self-actualization needs: become volunteer to help AIDS virus carrier will complete people idea of spread love.
TV shows Category
Children's program cartoons like superman, spider-man and all of Disney Cartoons
News Program many TV stations have shows to report the current news, what happened around us, what big internation things happened in other counties. Like FOX, ESPN, ABC,CCTV,and so on
Detective Program CSI, Lie to me, Bones and many kinds of TV shows to describe how detctivers find the murderer.
Moives Romanc: Titanic, Romeo and Juliet and so on Suspense: The Seven, Identity and so on Children's: The Garfield, Super man... Horror: Black Friday, A Nightmare... Action: Jack Chen's Moive, Jet Lee's moives Documentary: Hitler, Stalin
Romanc: Titanic Romeo and Juliet
Brokeback Mountain
American's sweetheart
Four wedding and one funeral
The notebook
Notting Hill
Wall-e
Legend of fall
the weeding planner
caseblanca
There's something about marry
shakespeare in love
Falling in love
Sex and the city the moive
Happy endings
American's sweetheart
The weeding planner
There's something about marry
falling in love
sex and the city the moive
Sad endings
Titanic
romeo and juliet
Four wedding and one funeral
Brokeback Mountain
There are many people like to watch movies, especially
03/03/2011
Outline of Kinds of Hotels
Introduction
1. introduce the hotel
2. Thesis: hotels into three large group based on location
Develop paragraph
1. paragraph one
a. what is airport hotel
b. describe this category
i. one day
c. give example
i.
ii.
2. paragraph two
a. what is downtown hotel
b. describe this category
i. luxurious
ii. three to five days
c. give example
i. .
3. paragraph three
a. what is resort hotel
b. describe this category
i. one week to an entire season
c. give example
i.
Conclusion- most of hotels located near airport, downtown and resort areas.
Composition 149a (03)
My New Year's Resolution
Tiankai Zhu
01/06/2010
An new year means a new starts, we always want to forget or leave our bad luck and memory from last year. Someone said that if a man does not have a dream, then what he lives for? I can't help to support him. Family is significant to me, at the new year, I 'd like to bulid a prefect relationship with my family. Since I was two years old, my parents left me to my grandparents, then they went to Beijing to build up their enterprise. Athough my family become richer and richer, our relationship were not seemed closed. Then, when I was eight years old, I left my hometown to other city to study. Although I knew that city has a good primary school, I really did not want to leave with my relatives. I just knew listen to the counsel of my elders, so I studied in that city, lived in the school, and only could back to my home once a week. By the way, at that time, cell phone was not popular in china, so I could not contact my parents frequented. All these points make my parents and I had a cold relationship. If I could choose, I would not leave my hometown to study at a strange city. Maybe there are no “if” in the world, this word just loser’s dream that never come true.
So, I reallly want to have a close relationship with my family. In 2011, my age is 21, I had already became an audlt, I don't want just leave this problem any more. My cousin will get married in this years, and all of my relationship will show up ant that time, I believe it's a good time for me to rebulid up the relationship with my family. In a word, my new year's resolution is I want to build a prefect relationship with my family.
Free Writing
1/10/2011
Time management
Right now, in the world all off things are going faster and effective. People are trying to solve their problems with a little time, so, they begin to plan which can also called time management. I think it's a way to deal with our time and problems. I think if we could learn how to deal with our time and how to let our working become more effective, we should learn the time management. If we want to learn it, we should do from the little things, such like management our studying time and playing times. When we feel free, we always do not want study, we want relax ourselves and try to find the funny things. I think it made us lost a lot of improtant time
Travel
1/11/2011
Instruction
Everyone likes to travelling, it could help us relax our mind, expand our experience and learn other countries' culture. For example, China has 5000 years history, and Chinese elder left many traditional cultural to the country. If people have chance to travel China, their brain must be crushed from the colorful culture. When people decide to travel, they had a lot of things need to be fixed. The top three problems for most of traveler might be their travelling fee, visa and their safety.
01/23/2011
Ex. 2.13 Writing Assignment
Most Chinese care about their phone numbers or plate of their cars, it‘s a behavior of superstitions. From here, many people want to know why most Chinese are superstitious? In my opinions, first of all, to the superstitious most of Chinese rather believe it to be true than not. For example, most of Chinese do not like NO.4 inside their phone numbers or plates, because the pronunciation of 4 is simlar like "Death" in Chinese, which means it will bring unluck to them. Second, China has 5,000 years history, every of Chinese elders are superstitious, with time going, those behaviors of superstitions become our traditional culture. Such like, Chinese New Year, at that day, the elders must give their children"Hong Bao" which means wish their children's life will go safety and luckly. Finally, there are about 100 millions people in China are buddhistischand, and many temples locate in China. So, it makes many people trust religion.
01/24/2011
Ex. 2.14
Free writing
My major is finance, but I do not interested in it. In Beijing, my father has a company of his own, he wishes I can take off his business after I graduate from university, it makes me must choose finance as my major. My father told me that if i choose finance, it could help me make a lot of money and improve my state. For me, I just do not have that ability to deal with money and management a company. I like to have a close relationship with my friends, i do not want have a distant with them, because when i become a boss, i must keep away from them, and only have fake friends that just care about money and state. Since i had chosen it, I would like succeed in it, not for me, but aslo for my family. I think as an international student, if i study finance, at first i must improve my vocabulary, because there are many specific words in there. Second, we must pay our attention in the class, especially take the notes in the class. Most of Chinese are very shy, we believe that if we ask question to the teacher which means we did not listen carefully in the class, stop doing that, if we have questions, we must points out that, and put the tips in ur mind. Third, if we want succeed in finance we must do the exercise by ourselves, which could give a deep mind of the knowledge. Finally, we can try to deal with little business of our own, do not need spend a lot of money, just give a try and test yourself. That it, we just work hard and nerve give up, we will succeed in the future.
Paragraph
If we want succeed in Finance major, we must have
01/25/2011
p.104
Before i take a test, i had always feel norvise, because the test is like an unknown question, i am very confused, and often worry about if i miss some key points of knowledge or if i can do well. If i can choose the type of questions which test i should take, i would like to take multiple choice questions. The multiple choice question is very easy and it seems like give you many key terms to help you solve it and recall your mind, i just need to check if my result match the choices. On the other hands, if i can't solve it, at least, i only need to choose the answer that feel comfortable, it not like short answer or essay. By the way, the True/False question is a kind of very confused for me, because its seems like too similar, and if i do not pay much attention on it, it would be cause a lot of problems.
01/27/2011
Plagiarism
Plagiarism is the unauthorized use or close imitation of the language and thoughts of another author and the representation of them as one's own original work. I heard that there was guy spend a lot of time in OU's library try to find the paper that had plagiarismed. Finally, he found a lot papers, and even had many people had already gradated many years, but according to this researched, many people lost dregards.
http://abclocal.go.com/wtvg/story?section=news/local&id=4045296
http://www.ohio.edu/linguistics/info/plagiarism.html
02/01/2011
Exercise 6.7
2. My country had some of the most beautiful sights you will ever see, in fact, as 5000 years history country, the beautiful sights are cover every where in China.
Builds
The Great Wall, TianAnMen square, Chairman Mao Square
Artwork
BinMaYong, Huangguo Mountain
My country had some of the most beautiful sights you will never see, such like the huge building The Great Wall, amazing artwork BinMa Yong and the natural sights Huangguo Mountain.
6.
many big companies require speaking english
the place you travel often speak english
American Movie speak english
english is a international language
English is the first International language, many big companies require there workers speak English. Many elders want their children speak one more language, of course should be English, and they slao want their children study abord where the pace speak English. students whose natiove language is not English may face many problems that English speakers do not encounter, such like the job requires, family's suggestion and for their education.
02/04/2011
Ex.6.12
Thesis Statement:
There may be several reasons, but three stand out.
1. One reason people save their books is to use them as reference material.
A. Reference
Example
B. Family
2. Another reason some people save books is to make a good impression.
A. library
1. look well read and therefore sophisticated
2. subtly reveal their interests.
3. people who enjoy reading have discovered the magic of books.
A. Each has transported the reader to another place.
B. repersents an experience
C. Example.
02/22/2011
EX. 9.4
Motivation
something that causes a person to act in a certain way, do a certain thing, etc.
Becasue it's the article's title, so I want give the deninition.
Esteem
regard with respect or admiration
One of the category of needs, I think it;s might be improtant
Actualization
turn into action or fact
One of the category of needs, and I don't know the word.
campaign
to serve in
I Just do not know the meaning
ailment
a physical disorder or illness, especially of a minor
Don't konw the meaning
hierarchy
any system of persons or things ranked one above another.
It's printing as BOLD type, so I think it's improtant.
fulfill
to perform or do, as duty; obey or follow, as commands.
This word is appear several times, I think it's improtant.
1. hunger, thirst.survival
security, protection. security and freedom
sense of belonging ,love. relationship with people
self-esteem, recognition, status. respect from people
self development, self realization. complete the goal of life
2. advertisers would make more attractive ads for their costumers by understand consumer needs.
3. physiological: restaurant offer food
safety needs: car and house will make you feel safe
social needs: facebook supply a place for peopkle to make friends
esteem needs: be interview by TV make a person has more popularity
self-actualization needs: become volunteer to help AIDS virus carrier will complete people idea of spread love.
TV shows
Category
Children's program
cartoons like superman, spider-man and all of Disney Cartoons
News Program
many TV stations have shows to report the current news, what happened around us, what big internation things happened in other counties. Like FOX, ESPN, ABC,CCTV,and so on
Detective Program
CSI, Lie to me, Bones and many kinds of TV shows to describe how detctivers find the murderer.
Moives
Romanc: Titanic, Romeo and Juliet and so on
Suspense: The Seven, Identity and so on
Children's: The Garfield, Super man...
Horror: Black Friday, A Nightmare...
Action: Jack Chen's Moive, Jet Lee's moives
Documentary: Hitler, Stalin
Romanc:
Titanic
Romeo and Juliet
Brokeback Mountain
American's sweetheart
Four wedding and one funeral
The notebook
Notting Hill
Wall-e
Legend of fall
the weeding planner
caseblanca
There's something about marry
shakespeare in love
Falling in love
Sex and the city the moive
Happy endings
American's sweetheart
The weeding planner
There's something about marry
falling in love
sex and the city the moive
Sad endings
Titanic
romeo and juliet
Four wedding and one funeral
Brokeback Mountain
There are many people like to watch movies, especially
03/03/2011
Outline of Kinds of Hotels
Introduction
1. introduce the hotel
2. Thesis: hotels into three large group based on location
Develop paragraph
1. paragraph one
a. what is airport hotel
b. describe this category
i. one day
c. give example
i.
ii.
2. paragraph two
a. what is downtown hotel
b. describe this category
i. luxurious
ii. three to five days
c. give example
i. .
3. paragraph three
a. what is resort hotel
b. describe this category
i. one week to an entire season
c. give example
i.
Conclusion- most of hotels located near airport, downtown and resort areas.